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Breathlessness,
Trudging towards the desolation.
Weightlessness,
On the edge of certain destruction.

Darkness twirling,
Dancing her trademark sombre rhythm.

Light burning,
Smoldering his unforgettable smile.

The cloudiness lifting,
Surroundings become memorable.
Memory slips less abundant,
Able to grasp onto details.
Im actually not sure what to title this so, any advice, let me know.  Also. I'm not very certain about this piece.
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Ohhho.. those memorable moments you speak of...that is you dwelling.. sometimes our misery gives us inspiration and we can release it in an artistic manner..the burning and smoldering together amplifies an actual physical and an emotional fight.. you can picture the destruction you speak of internal and externally..constant battle as in to spite another or even yourself.. do you want to feel better or do you secretly enjoy these painful times.. forgive but never forget..stored for safe keeping for when you decide to return and go over each personal attack once more till you have returned to the place where numbness is the only feeling.. the more heart ache and pain the higher your tolerance is.. very nice.. I can note ya one thing I'd look over again..